Thursday, October 8, 2015

rhetorical distillation 1

In the Article ‘’Green Spaces That Makes Kids Smarter ‘’By, Ogla Khazan claims throughout the article that demonstrates   and highlights  the idea of her research. During her viewings of a school in Long Beach was that a fifth of the students had asthma. She was determined to change that. She noticed from her findings that is was  from 500 trucks that  went by the school every hour. That the result of  road traffic that the trucks gave off a rubbery smell from the diesel particles. That the children were breathing in during the school day. That contained  more than a  normal amount of carbon. How she determined  the findings of  how she supports her thesis about the children that she found had asthma ,  creating  tests  about what she has studied  and uncovered throughout her research. She learns that one of the leading factors linked to asthma is air pollution exposure. Leading up to her research she proves that nature is good for your mental health attention and mood in both children and adults. Moving on from a school in Long Beach that had the same problem in a different part of the world . The study at  a children's school in Barcelona was introduced by Proceedings of the National Academy of Sciences that suggests about green spaces can improve the protecting of the child and their brains from air pollution.  In order to really go in with research to protect the kids from harmful pollutants and figure out a solution was what she was determined to do. Because every kid deserves to be safe at school and improve so they can learn and be successful. They were  speaking to children,  professional researchers  around the world. To really show that she believes in the power of nature is the best medicine for anyone at any age for your health.





          Author/Credibility: Olga Khazan they way she can present the way of learning to connect it with nature.How she really believed that nature can impact the kids way of thinking and learning.
 
           Ethos: The idea that nature is a good for your mental health for kids and adults to boost their attention and focus to improve in school to succeed. but to see that nature is the best medicine for learning.

Objectivity/Bias: The way she presents nature as a learning tool in the kid’s  way of seeing how much it helps them  in school. That having class in the woods is not reasonable place to teach but that the environmental regulations have to be met.


Sources/Support: sources were that she went through a series of number and word tests. she supported her claims with facts that she researched throughout the process.



Tone: a serious inspiring


Thesis: How she believes that nature can improve mental health in kids that are learning at school and adults as well.



Opinion/Reflection: The explanations throughout the article she was making about nature really got me to believe that nature is the best medicine for anyone. That children should be more exposed to the outdoors during school hours. To just breath in some fresh air and forget about the stress of school for a moment. Kids need to unwind by playing outdoors and going on adventures. I do believe that it does improve your attention and memory because you are calm and focused on what you are doing.Nature what i feel is best for kids. That you should have a class outside to be experiencing the good ol outdoors. And be hands on with nature at its finest. To be safe and protected while you are outdoors.

















  

Khazan, Olga M. "Green Spaces Make Kids Smarter." The Atlantic. Atlantic Media Company, 16 June 2015. Web. 04 Oct. 2015

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